Writing Point of View (POV)

Writing point of views.jpgI have been asked questions about this topic before so I finally decided that I should you know…write about it! 🙂

One of the reasons I haven’t yet written about this comes from the fact I never struggled with the question myself. My writing has always been written in a specific POV. It was just naturally how the story was told and so I never had this “OMG which POV should I choose?” dilemma.

However since it has been asked of me a number of times, I guess it is something other writers do wonder.

FIRST PERSON POV

This definitely seems to be a popular one. First Person is where the narrator is (almost always) the  protagonist.

Example: I always knew the police would find out eventually, keeping murder a secret was not exactly easy.

The Good

Many writers choose this especially for their earlier works. It is considered very natural to write in. After all, we all live inside our own heads and so that nice internal monologue we have allows you to completely understand how to write in this point of view.

You can also use this point of view to really get a strong sense of your character and help your readers really connect. After all, they are seeing and hearing everything your protagonist is, instant connect (especially with some readers who find reading a character of the same gender, makes them feel even more connected and involved.).

The Bad

However there are some cons to this POV.

It is considered limited, after all you are just following one character around. Imagine watching a movie and only following one single character. Let’s take Die Hard (‘cus I loves me some Die Hard). If you only followed John McClane you wouldn’t see Hans Gruber (SPOILER) shoot Joseph Takagi, or the exchange between Al Powell and Dwayne Robinson after Ellis is killed.

It would be a very different movie.

You also have to spend all your time with just this one person. They have to be doing things, saying things all the time that move the story along. You also never get to see any subplots that could have developed with other characters without the protagonist around.

While this was seen as a positive, we now have the negative – there have been cases were a character’s gender affects how the reader can connect with them. Some men struggle to read first person books where the protagonist is female, and vice versa. This means that some readers will avoid books where the protagonist is not their gender – especially in first person where they are following this one character around.

 

THIRD PERSON (Unlimited Omniscience) POV

This definitely used to be the most common, the go-to POV of choice especially for fiction, not sure if that’s still the case because so many books I’m reading these days are in first person.

Third person is where the narrator narrates using he, she, they, them, it etc. The narrator is separate from the characters unlike in first person, where the narrator is one of the characters.

The Unlimited Omniscience of this POV is where the writer can show the view of any character. So in chapter one they could be in the mind of the protagonist and then switch over to the antagonist.

The Good

This allows the reader to get a feel for all the characters the writer wants to show. It also allows you to drift off and see other subplots. So instead of just following one character around and watching their day, you hop about and see everything 🙂

This multiple viewpoints can really expand your novel and gives you a good connection to several characters, allowing you to understand why they react and act the way they do.

It increases the ability of having subplots with other characters.

It also relieves the writer from having to keep one character hoop jumping through the entire novel.

Also, if any of your readers take a dislike to your protagonist, then they can still enjoy your book by enjoying the other characters.

The Bad

It can be harder to build up a connection between reader and characters because they don’t have that more intimate connection.

If you aren’t clear with who is speaking or reacting, you can confuse your reader and make the plot sluggish.

You have a lot more to keep an eye on. You need to remember and keep track of all your characters, what they are doing, where they are going, how they are reacting to things.

You have to balance how often you jump between characters especially within one chapter as this can leave a chapter/story fragmented and hard to follow if you r characters are constantly jumping between characters.

You have to work harder to create individual unique voices for your characters, otherwise they can all end up sounding the same.

 

THIRD PERSON (limited Omniscience) POV

This is obviously still using he, she, it etc but instead of going into every character’s head, you write only a few or even just one. If you narrate say through two characters, it is usually done staggered. So one chapter will be in one character’s pov and the next chapter will follow the second character’s pov.

The Good

The good points to this are the same as the Unlimited Third person POV

It allows you to stay focused and stops you getting too overwhelmed trying to keep track of several characters.

The Bad

The bad points really only affect this POV if you only follow one character. So if you have a third person POV but are limiting yourself to just one character’s point of view. For example if you are writing as the narrator, following the protagonist around.

In which case, you kind of have the bad points from both third person and first person, in my opinion, it’s not one I would recommend but hey, who the hell am I?

 

SECOND PERSON POV

I thought I would throw this in as a number of people have asked me about it. After all we hear about First and Third person a lot which does leave people wondering, what’s Second person?

It’s all “You”.

Example: You have to catch the train and it’s late again and you’re going to get it from your boss. Why does this always happen on Monday? You really to find another job or maybe just get out of this damn city.

The Good

It’s weird and pretty unique in books, so it would definitely make you stand out. It would also be quite challenging to write because it doesn’t come as naturally as first or third person.

The Bad

It’s weird and pretty unique in books for a reason. It doesn’t read that well and many readers just won’t like reading it. Hence why it’s not really used.

But hey, if you want to do something different and aren’t looking to sell loads of copies of your book, maybe give it a whirl.

 

Me!

For those of you desperately wanting to know which POV I write in, that would be Third Person Unlimited. It has always come the most natural to me and I like the freedom of building more complexity that needs to follow different characters to work.

In fact I never used to like reading first person books because I found them frustrating that I never got to follow other (often more exciting/interesting) characters. I like being able to see what other characters are doing and how they react to each other.

I have now read some first person books that I love, but the authors have really made them captivating. Other first person books I hate because I just can’t connect to the protagonist, or worse I just don’t agree with how he/she is reacting to things.

So in truth, I reach for a third person book more often than not and (almost) all my favourite books are third person.

 

Conclusion

So, which POV should you write in? The one that you want, the one that works the best for you. If you really aren’t sure, then write a scene first in one POV then in another POV. Believe me, you will probably find one that just feels natural either to you or to the story you are trying to tell.

In the end, there is no right or wrong answer. Some readers will love first person, some will love third person, some may even really love second person! Don’t think about your readers when you pick your POV, think about which feels best for your writing, your characters, your story.

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Thanks for being patient with me, since this post is VERY late. Not my fault, people visited.

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Happy writing

Ari

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